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X-Terminator - R.A.P. (A masterpiece in my own eyes)
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I give you “R.A.P.”. A masterpiece as far as my raps go. I’ve worked so hard on this. So, please take time to read it, absorb it, and leave your comments or thoughts on it. I really need COMMENTS, people (How was it? Which verse/line did you like?). This was a great challenge I thought I couldn’t do, but I pushed my humble abilities to the limits.

Well, one more thing, it’s “R.A.P.” and not “RAP” for a reason, and that’s the beauty of this month’s rap. Most of you might notice the “pattern” in the structure of the rap. For those who won’t notice, hmmmmm, I’ll tell you at the end so you can go back and go through it again.

I really really hope everybody enjoys this one whether or not you like rap or whatnot.

Well, here it is … , R.A.P. :



The Saga

July

(R.A.P.)



[Verse One]

R…

Riveting Rhymes Ribbon-Ripping Rhythms Really Represent Rap /

Raving, but Rewarding Rhetorics, u’d Rather Rewind that /

Removing Raunchy Rappers Ridiculin’ Rap’s Recognizable Rep /

Restoring Refined Rap, Remaining Rappers Require Rest /

Refused to lose the Race, I Rose, Running Rapidly by my Rivals /

Repeatedly Releasin’ Rounds when I Raise my Raging Rifles /

Real Recognize Real, u should Refrain from Recyclin’ Rhymes /

I Reduce Robbery Rates, but Radical Revolutionary Riots Regain Rise /

Rulers Rule Righteously? Cuz Raids Rain on Regular Residents /

Royal Renown Rhymes Revived n got me Rappin’ to Remain Relevant /

I’m Raisin’ the Rail, out of Reach, like a Rector Readily Raisin’ a Ruler /

Residing in a Recording studio Rehearsing, as u Revel with ur Ruger /

You Restate n Rephrase my Raps. Till u Really Rhyme, u oughtta Revise, sir! /

I’m Relentless for my Rhymes, Review my Ratings, if you Require a Reminder /

Rhymes Reserved Royalty, Rendering Remarkably, Reshaping Rome in Ruins /

Reverse that last line, it makes sense Read Reversely! So watchya doin’ ?!



[Verse Two]

A…

Answer me, why is Ahmad Always Awesome And Amazing? /

Achievements Are All that he Admires, Acmes he’s Attaining /

Acknowledge n Appreciate the Accomplishments And my Attempts /

Abandonin’ you in Awe, no Air, Asthma Attacks n cardiac Arrests /

I Aviate, I’m Airborne, Ain’t Afraid At All As I Ascend in Altitude /

Alert, Accurately Aimin’ Artillery to Assassinate u for ur Attitude /

Aware of my Armor Attire? Awaken! I’m Avengin’ rap with An Anvil /

Axes n Arms, Alternatively Appoint An Anchor? Attention, cuz it’s Angled! /

Accompanied by my Automatic. It Abuses Anatomies with Anger /

Aggressive Attacks, Astonishing Arsenal, Advance u to the After-/

Life, After Amputating ur Arms, And Arteries, I’ll Ask if ur An Atheist /

I’m Active n Adventurous, Arranging Auto-bots to Assault the Aliens /

Abnormal Anthropoid, Arriving at Ammonia Avenue in Amsterdam /

In the A.M. with an A-Bomb, Annihilation, Awaitin’ the Aftermath ! /

Arabic Antagonist, Acquired Artistic Abilities n Aptitudes for Ages /

Acceleratin’ to greatness, Acclaiming Antiquity, Approved by the Ancients …



[Verse Three]

P…

I’m Paintin’ Pictures Perfectly, Providin’ Perked up ears with Poetry /

In Presentin’ Powerful Prose Poems, I’m Portrayin’ Proficiency /

On Point, Pokin’ your Pancreas with Pointed Pencils n Pens /

Penetrating Parts of your Pressure Points cuz I don’t Pretend /

Pac (2pac) is in my Preaches, this is a Portal to the Path of Progress /

Proceedin’ Positively, Plottin’ Potent Poems in the Process /

Can’t Possibly use Pesos or Pay Pal for skills to be Purchased /

Persistence Polishes Performance, n Practice Produces “Perfect” /

Pilin’ Pages of Parts of raps on Pads, and Pieces of Paper /

Preparin’ Phonetic Pistols Programmed to Pulverize the People /

Permanently Pressurizing the Public to Put up with the Power /

Persuadin’ Politicians to signin’ Peace Pacts Phobic of my Posture /

Publishing Postulates from Pakistan to Panama, Proclaiming Pride /

Provoking Prescribed Painful Prospects to Ponder when in my Prime/

I Presume you’re not Prepared for my Plan of Pillagin’ villages /

Pave the way for my Parade, Pay attention n Peep how I Part them Pyramids ….



So, what do y’all think ? Did you notice why I think this is so great ?

By the way, the 2nd to last line in the first verse can be read backwards “Ruins in Rome …..” but without the commas. It still makes sense and kinda gives you the opposite process!

For those who haven’t noticed yet, it’s R.A.P., meaning the first verse’s words “almost” exclusively start with the letter R, the 2nd verse with the letter A, and the 3rd with P. Now go back over it, and absorb it fully ! Please ! Smile

Readers, please, leave your COMMENTS below (How was it? Which verse/line did you like?) , I NEED THEM !

Thanks, and stay tuned for more  8)
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#2
rap this over a beat and then lets hear how it comes out....otherwise shutup
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#3
Fyi ... I ain't no pro ... I only write raps on hobby, so I don't have the capabilities to record this ...
I've tried to do so on my PC, shit don't come out clear ....
So, all u get are lyrics ... Comment on them or shutup
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#4
most of it doesn't rhyme.
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#5
Shows how much you guys know about hip-hop ...
Most of it DOES rhyme, if not perfectly, it rhymes "slantly" or it can be rhymed when rapped ...

Man, I got Julius Luciano sayin' my shit was "DOOOOOPE !!", so there's a pro's opinion !!  8)
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#6
man this is some awesome shit! Straight up man, this shit goes hard and it is fucking original. Never heard/read anyone do this type shit.
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#7
"Refused to lose the Race, I Rose, Running Rapidly by my Rivals /

Repeatedly Releasin’ Rounds when I Raise my Raging Rifles /"

And

"Can’t Possibly use Pesos or Pay Pal for skills to be Purchased /

Persistence Polishes Performance, n Practice Produces “Perfect” /"

Fucking awesome man.
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#8
(07-10-2010, 12:35 AM)xterminator14 link Wrote:Shows how much you guys know about hip-hop ...
Most of it DOES rhyme, if not perfectly, it rhymes "slantly" or it can be rhymed when rapped ...

Man, I got Julius Luciano sayin' my shit was "DOOOOOPE !!", so there's a pro's opinion !!  8)
Attempts to Arrest, Anger to After, Amsterdam to Aftermath, Paper to People, Power to Posture, Villages to Pyramids. If you have to mispronounce words to rhyme, then it must really be hip-hop lol
It seems like you're matching syllables.
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(07-10-2010, 02:10 AM)iKingD22 link Wrote:Attempts to Arrest, Anger to After, Amsterdam to Aftermath, Paper to People, Power to Posture, Villages to Pyramids. If you have to mispronounce words to rhyme, then it must really be hip-hop lol
It seems like you're matching syllables.

Man are you fucking serious? You do know what a rhyme is right? A rhyme does not necessarily mean that the end of the words rhyme...the words should have something in common. For example... vill-A-ges and pry-A-mids...They go together and you don't have to mispronounce the word. Also...pow-ER and postu-RE...have similar sound. I'm not going to even bother with Amsterdam and Aftermath because that should be pretty obvious that it rhymes. Then there is ang-ER and aft-ER and A-ttemp-TS and A-rre-ST.

And if you didn't get it, the letters that are in capitals are the ones that rhyme...
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#10
I think its pretty dope but X if u get offended when somone says something bad about your raps then don't fucken post it man because not everybody is gunna see what you see in the rhyme with that being said shit is nice but be confident in yourself and you won't write a wack rap
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